
The city bustled with activity,
Motorists speeding toward their destination
Pedestrian’s jay walking in the way of those with an agenda
And then you came along with your mighty roar
Demanding every bit of the space like it all belonged to you
The entire city gave way to your mighty supremacy
But little did you know, that beyond the might there is a heart
A heart that gives couples a reason to cuddle
A heart that gives the scurrying motorists a reason to let go
A heart that gives me a reason to smile and unwind !
Nice one :) Though I am not able to figure who you are talking about! :)
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Hey thanks da...its about the rain shwe :)
ReplyDeletehow very interesting! good personification of the rain :)
ReplyDeleteyes, i agree with viti, good personification.
ReplyDeletethough i like the previous poem more :)
btw, both of the poems seem to be written on the spur during the monsoon. why did u wait for so long to start a blog? :)
@vrivti.. Thank you so much :)
ReplyDelete@adee.. Thanks a lot :) You're absolutely right, it was written some time back during the monsoons:) .
I just needed some inspiration to start a blog..and was apprehensive if I did start one, would I keep it alive..:)
now that u have, pls continue posting :) m sure u have a lot waiting in ur diary :)
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